Close
my eyes, and breathe,
I can hear the rain creeping through trees.
But the ceiling fan plays games in circles,
Mocking, as it sells slaps for dreams.
I can hear the rain creeping through trees.
But the ceiling fan plays games in circles,
Mocking, as it sells slaps for dreams.
The
sky drowned slowly in nothingness,
like a black hole, without deaths kiss.
Like dark, without the suction of light,
Or is that just my heart?
Like dark, without the suction of light,
Or is that just my heart?
And
I’l listen as you rustle leaves,
softly treading while I sleep.
and I wouldn’t hear you from our bed,
softly treading while I sleep.
and I wouldn’t hear you from our bed,
But I was scurrying out our door again.
I
run home smelling like your perfume,
the wind blows you back into my room,
Your tongue turns as I gasp for air,
your shape that fits perfectly, that groove, right there.
the wind blows you back into my room,
Your tongue turns as I gasp for air,
your shape that fits perfectly, that groove, right there.
But
the sun brings the dawn of new hands,
And I find myself clinging to another man.
Who will sense my spirit as it writhes, as it glides,
leave my hands with a smile, I can’t deny.
And I find myself clinging to another man.
Who will sense my spirit as it writhes, as it glides,
leave my hands with a smile, I can’t deny.
And
I board his plane to zenith, hit nadir instead,
“I’m busy, I’l fuck you, next time”, he said.
And I’l juggle two halves, not willing to choose,
I’d rather rape ego, than ask, for either of you.
So night returns me to our window, with my lips sealed,
lost in the loneliness of the bats screams,
and we run around and have sex in this bush for hours,
wanting each other, cause it can’t be ours.
“I’m busy, I’l fuck you, next time”, he said.
And I’l juggle two halves, not willing to choose,
I’d rather rape ego, than ask, for either of you.
So night returns me to our window, with my lips sealed,
lost in the loneliness of the bats screams,
and we run around and have sex in this bush for hours,
wanting each other, cause it can’t be ours.
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It started off like a dream. Amazing atmosphere. The way you build up to a great end is breathtaking. But the end, was to me, found wanting.
ReplyDeleteTHANK GOD!!! I think I should starve myself off writing cause I finally get a decent comment from you then. :] Love that you liked it../and It felt like it lacked something..but I dont know why I wanted to leave it that way.
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ReplyDeleteI dunno, it didn't scream you like some of your others but I did enjoy its dreamlike quality as Sharad said. I dunno. I really really liked it, I looved the context and the pretty flow, but it didn't have your usual stamp.
All the same :D