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A search for happiness is nothing but finding a home in a hearts of few so safe..that you cant help but keep trying to stay in. Hope yall still want in.
~Shraddha

In a while,looking at a few old words you wrote once,
some being those, which makes you wonder how you wrote it,
unless you got that ardour , that small drug you were addicted with,that small shelter, that old family. Makes you silent.

In a while, now writing a few words. And that exhilation to share it,ain't the same. And you think about the old time.
Makes you silent again.
~ Manisha.

One day when I get superpowers (ahem), I'd ask you to hold my hands and I would make you see what I see. Feel, How I feel. I would want to have you look at the world, the stars, the moon, the ocean, the way I see them. And in that maelstrom of visions I would get to see the world in your image. Experience this sanctum through your eyes. And then when I write, that would be my greatest work ever. Because It would have been written by all of us and none of us. But I don't have superpowers, so lets make this place, the sanctum in my dream.
~Sharad


Monday, April 4, 2011

In Dying

And so the mist swelled up from the snow
dancing in its own gloom glow.
Swallowing sun rays whole.
The roses crippled in the darkened night
begging for the return of light.
To burn out the blight.

Gold hues abandoned the circlet in the sky
and dust replaced the eye.
Permanence in sight.
No more in love's ache and never in hurt.
A frail existence subverted,


And for the body?
Burn it.

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  1. GPAPApril 5, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    What is Subverted?
    ~Shraddha. : ]

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  2. RachelApril 5, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    Definition of SUBVERT
    transitive verb
    1
    : to overturn or overthrow from the foundation : ruin
    2
    : to pervert or corrupt by an undermining of morals, allegiance, or faith


    How I use it?
    To overcome.

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  3. The Wandering Philosopher.April 6, 2011 at 2:56 PM

    Are the two of you getting influenced by someone?? *frantically points at himself*

    A very lyrical piece i must say. It literally flew off my tongue. I felt as if I was watching faith being overshadowed by doubts. I believe you can understand what analogy i'm trying here.

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  4. RachelApril 7, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    Meh. I don't like it anymore
    I think I'm going to change it again >.<
    I dislike this piece. Been bugging me.

    Anyway, yeah. Maybe a bit of you in it hmm =P
    Thanks for the comment.

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  5. RainchildApril 8, 2011 at 11:59 AM

    I dont know..i really didnt like the piece when i didnt know the meaning of subverted..but now that i do..i love it..is that weird? maybe i hated the fact that i didnt know..but this poem somehow went with black for me..like a dark corner...
    it was like a drug.
    love the flow..
    and sharad..do you see anyone else here? i mean seriously.

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  6. Eternally SereneDecember 14, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    And so the mist swelled up from the snow
    dancing in its own gloom glow.
    Swallowing sun rays whole.

    Beautiful

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  7. GPAPFebruary 1, 2012 at 6:30 PM

    Should we delete this place? I feel so far off from when I was here so long ago.

    Thank you. I wish you could have seen it.

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