A search for happiness is nothing but finding a home in a hearts of few so safe..that you cant help but keep trying to stay in. Hope yall still want in.
~Shraddha
In a while,looking at a few old words you wrote once,
some being those, which makes you wonder how you wrote it,
unless you got that ardour , that small drug you were addicted with,that small shelter, that old family. Makes you silent.
In a while, now writing a few words. And that exhilation to share it,ain't the same. And you think about the old time.
Makes you silent again.
~ Manisha.
One day when I get superpowers (ahem), I'd ask you to hold my hands and I would make you see what I see. Feel, How I feel. I would want to have you look at the world, the stars, the moon, the ocean, the way I see them. And in that maelstrom of visions I would get to see the world in your image. Experience this sanctum through your eyes. And then when I write, that would be my greatest work ever. Because It would have been written by all of us and none of us. But I don't have superpowers, so lets make this place, the sanctum in my dream.
~Sharad
Sunday, October 4, 2009
Writer's Block
Opportunities galoreIn a blank piece of paper,But tall tales are shortImpressed on skyline.Ironic to take it ironicTurnabout is fair play,Book of passing dreamsStargazes a retrofuture.Of shepherd, of nymph,And other mismatchesIn flip side couplingsFancy befriended me.As water pals up earthSmear us with clay,In plastic of plastic artOpportunities galore.
-Fareed
I liked it, But I didn't care for the second stanza. And I have no real reason as to why that is...It just didn't ring off right in my head. Maybe I'm just weird. That aside, it seemed different for you, shorter lines perhaps. But interesting all the same. Nice read. :D
Rachel- Thanks for liking it. I don't care about the second stanza either, but could not overlook it somehow. Nothing to do with your eccentricity, no matter how enchanting it is :)
Rianchild- Not surprised to have you look into me. I saw it coming all alone :)
I liked it,
ReplyDeleteBut I didn't care for the second stanza. And I have no real reason as to why that is...It just didn't ring off right in my head. Maybe I'm just weird.
That aside, it seemed different for you, shorter lines perhaps. But interesting all the same.
Nice read. :D
It showed me how you construct..
ReplyDeleteand it wasnt amazing as a poem
but you wont believe how madly it helped me decode you.
Your mystery is fading fareed.
Are you scared? :]
<3 <3
Rachel- Thanks for liking it. I don't care about the second stanza either, but could not overlook it somehow. Nothing to do with your eccentricity, no matter how enchanting it is :)
ReplyDeleteRianchild- Not surprised to have you look into me. I saw it coming all alone :)
Decode me baby, I am scared and I feel naked <3
*Laughter*
ReplyDeleteI would decode you darlin..but when you turn me on this way...i can make nothing but the sensless wild animal work.
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