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Say a few words. ~ Rachel

A search for happiness is nothing but finding a home in a hearts of few so safe..that you cant help but keep trying to stay in. Hope yall still want in.
~Shraddha

In a while,looking at a few old words you wrote once,
some being those, which makes you wonder how you wrote it,
unless you got that ardour , that small drug you were addicted with,that small shelter, that old family. Makes you silent.

In a while, now writing a few words. And that exhilation to share it,ain't the same. And you think about the old time.
Makes you silent again.
~ Manisha.

One day when I get superpowers (ahem), I'd ask you to hold my hands and I would make you see what I see. Feel, How I feel. I would want to have you look at the world, the stars, the moon, the ocean, the way I see them. And in that maelstrom of visions I would get to see the world in your image. Experience this sanctum through your eyes. And then when I write, that would be my greatest work ever. Because It would have been written by all of us and none of us. But I don't have superpowers, so lets make this place, the sanctum in my dream.
~Sharad


Thursday, December 10, 2009

Cheating Shadows...

Ive got aged jars with venom floating inside, when i wished for clouds so silver lined, and is it its insanity that beckons me, or is it your ignorance that holds the key. The tunnel ended in light, I ran as you came, the house breaking down, in its mason's mains, and as soon as I touched you and held you as mine, you vanished yet lingered, like passing time. Body spinning in circles, eyes searching for stones, no rubble, no blood, finally a home, every wish, every prayer finally come true, and I'm stuck ouside, with a brand new,you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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  1. GPAPDecember 10, 2009 at 2:17 PM

    Perhaps its my demons that make them fall,
    perhaps I was never worth a penny at all.
    Maybe its my vision that taints you in shame,
    Maybe im your venom, the bite blame.
    ~Shraddha

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  2. RachelDecember 11, 2009 at 7:27 PM

    Last second thought words?
    Loved both endings really
    I read the first one thinking it was the end and thought first, "I must write a comment saying how haunting that was"
    but then I read your second and I almost forgot how much I loved the previous ending. =P
    This was good, something I'd not expect. And it delved close to taboo.

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  3. RainchildDecember 12, 2009 at 11:07 AM

    Taboo? :]
    Haha.
    Well i was in two minds about whether or not i put the second end so i put it as a comment.
    :P
    I thought maybe the effects ruined.
    Must i remove it?
    AND ThankyouRachel.

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  4. gugsDecember 13, 2009 at 1:14 PM

    i dunno.. its been a while... ive been away... you guys are still beautiful...
    and you are too shreddiee babyy... i missed you all so...
    i dunno if i can write nemore... or im even capable to comment on nething...
    you seem refreshingly new shreddie... :)
    i love... <3
    gugs..
    peace!!!

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  5. Street - WalkerDecember 14, 2009 at 10:19 PM

    and as soon as I touched you and held you as mine,
    you vanished yet lingered, like passing time.

    thats a read.

    me loved it.
    yeah

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  6. The Wandering Philosopher.December 17, 2009 at 12:12 AM

    i wanted it to go on and then it ended.

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  7. Sameer Ahmed KhanDecember 19, 2009 at 2:11 PM

    Had a mystic feeling... Dunno why though!!
    Nice one by the way!

    Peace!

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  8. RainchildJanuary 2, 2010 at 12:08 PM

    Thank you Gurleen Manisha Sharad and Sameer.
    Love yall all.

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  9. Eternally SereneJanuary 5, 2010 at 4:22 AM

    Awesome.. That was truly wonderful.. and as soon as I touched you and held you as mine,
    you vanished yet lingered, like passing time that part left me feelin a lot

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  10. RainchildJanuary 7, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    Thank you : )

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