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A search for happiness is nothing but finding a home in a hearts of few so safe..that you cant help but keep trying to stay in. Hope yall still want in.
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In a while,looking at a few old words you wrote once,
some being those, which makes you wonder how you wrote it,
unless you got that ardour , that small drug you were addicted with,that small shelter, that old family. Makes you silent.

In a while, now writing a few words. And that exhilation to share it,ain't the same. And you think about the old time.
Makes you silent again.
~ Manisha.

One day when I get superpowers (ahem), I'd ask you to hold my hands and I would make you see what I see. Feel, How I feel. I would want to have you look at the world, the stars, the moon, the ocean, the way I see them. And in that maelstrom of visions I would get to see the world in your image. Experience this sanctum through your eyes. And then when I write, that would be my greatest work ever. Because It would have been written by all of us and none of us. But I don't have superpowers, so lets make this place, the sanctum in my dream.
~Sharad


Tuesday, January 5, 2010

End Of Beginning

cold black eyes stare me back as a tear rolls down inside never to show what you hold i suffer the not knowing why gray is turning black a void being defined memories beckon again foreshadowing my heart a ghost was i?? to unburden yourself?? just a mean was i?? towards your end?? never knew did i?? just what i meant?? i want to see you cry,, just for me this time.. i want to hear you call,, my name in your final breath.. i want to see you fall,, and try to reach my hand.. i want to know,, if i meant anything at all.. an empty shell were you?? in which i tried to fill my heart.. an eternal darkness were you?? which i tried to turn to light.. damsel in distress were you?? whose knight i tried to be.. what am i? did you never ask yourself?? why am i? did you never wonder why?? who am i? did you understand what i mean?? why should i? i never asked myself..
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  1. Eternally SereneJanuary 5, 2010 at 4:19 AM

    Hmmm i very much lack the inspiration to write these days... I try to write but nothing comes out whatsoever... I will be a bit more regular over here to try and find that old feeling back..

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  2. RachelJanuary 5, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    Good luck. I think...something has happened?
    Are we all again wave wandering?

    I liked the beginning stanza,
    For more reasons than one. Mostly because it reminded me of something.

    It was good, perhaps not your best, but it was good.

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  3. Eternally SereneJanuary 7, 2010 at 5:50 AM

    lol extreme lack of motivation.. i guess i will be inspired to write when i read.. thank you.. this was a bit personal i guess.. hence the message became more important or some shit..

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  4. RainchildJanuary 7, 2010 at 12:44 PM

    You seem very angry bout something. Too angry to form structural sentences atleast :P right?

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  5. Eternally SereneJanuary 8, 2010 at 8:52 AM

    hmmm i guess so.. anyway she had her purpose and i guess i was right in the way i used her.. this was what i felt before everything unfolded and before i realised what a fool i was to actually be with someone like her.. comment on the poem lil one :)

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  6. RainchildJanuary 9, 2010 at 12:40 AM

    The idea was really good. The structuring wasnt good though..it kept making me fall off as in it stopped me for some reason. I think if you want to and if you can work that way..rewrite this..when you arent so tense. No?

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  7. Eternally SereneJanuary 10, 2010 at 1:44 AM

    hmmm i guess i dont care enough to write it again.. will write something new rather than rewrite it again..

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  8. RainchildJanuary 15, 2010 at 4:52 AM

    : ] Bhaskaaaaaaarerrrrrr!!! *hugs*

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  9. Eternally SereneJanuary 17, 2010 at 10:55 PM

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww that felt good.. Dunno what i did to deserve that but i learnt enuff in life to never question the good things that happen :)

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  10. RainchildJanuary 18, 2010 at 11:56 AM

    : )

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