Crouching -
An angry low; being covered
blanket of snow.
Distaste to every death and being.
Living, barely breathing.
Icicles on the tip of my tongue.
Feeling frost harden skin while burning.
Slowly rain pouring and purging.
Deep breath, gag up the death.
The metamorphosis of heat and sun.
A warming upon an upturned face.
Crouch to a lounge, a stretch free from burden.
And the shelves of winter shatter in the wake
(Leaving chipped glass hidden for the future.)
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I'm not sure why I like this piece so much. I just loved writing it though.
I love that destruction
An angry low; being covered
blanket of snow.
Distaste to every death and being.
Living, barely breathing.
Icicles on the tip of my tongue.
Feeling frost harden skin while burning.
Slowly rain pouring and purging.
Deep breath, gag up the death.
The metamorphosis of heat and sun.
A warming upon an upturned face.
Crouch to a lounge, a stretch free from burden.
And the shelves of winter shatter in the wake
(Leaving chipped glass hidden for the future.)
-
I'm not sure why I like this piece so much. I just loved writing it though.
I love that destruction
Crouching -
ReplyDeleteAn angry low; being covered
blanket of snow.
Distaste to every death and being.
Living, barely breathing.
Icicles on the tip of my tongue. :D This part had beautiful flow for what is was..and after that the destruction got bigger and badder and there was just something awesome about it..except for one line which sounded a lil rappish,...and leaving chipped glass..which both for some reason made me laugh..but Love that deconstruction, yes! ~Shraddha..
<3<3<3
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