Walking among woods
never did a shepherd
found his lost sheep
Everything breaks,
even a stone,
but the mountains
couldn't cry,
whispered the sky
to lend them some rain
as they counted clouds
touching and leaving away.
The hands that cupped
to hold a river
moved away,
and never were
the two grains seen,
one that slipped away
and the other
that tried to
built a shelter
in between
the walls of
two fingers,
two grains of sand
attached to
one branch
no one saw
when they met
became one
and left.
Monday, November 23, 2009
Departure
Walking among woods
never did a shepherd
found his lost sheep
Everything breaks,
even a stone,
but the mountains
couldn't cry,
whispered the sky
to lend them some rain
as they counted clouds
touching and leaving away.
The hands that cupped
to hold a river
moved away,
and never were
the two grains seen,
one that slipped away
and the other
that tried to
built a shelter
in between
the walls of
two fingers,
two grains of sand
attached to
one branch
no one saw
when they met
became one
and left.
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The idea was really good but the construct was to weak to support it in my head
ReplyDeleteas in, it lacked in fluidity.
When i read it i felt literally felt breaks for some reason...which isnt a bad thing..but still kind of disrupts and disorients you a lil bit. No?
I wish the authors would mention their names...i really do.
yeah breaks..
ReplyDeletethey were written separately n joined/
Pretty, it is quite pretty.
ReplyDeleteLike truly a leaf falling to the floor
Graceful like.
hmmm i guess she has mentioned her name... yeah i too felt it was kinda hard to read cause it broke so much.. kinda relaxing and it was good in a diff way.. the last part was amazingly written..
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