The words play like a piano's tune, a beating soul, playing its master piece,
in timeless whispers of joy and sin, in seconds alive, and moments deceased.
And they pass through the boards the channels and streams, a shadow uncared for, unmourned,
and we'l stare and walk away unshaken, why? who knew what pulled the piano's chord?
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I clicked that picture and a song was playing in my head through the shoot, i dont know what song...but it just seemed to come out. and for once a photo inspired me.
~ Shraddha
hmmm i have been so out of touch i dont know what to comment whatosever.... i guess this was very very different.. not your best but i guess this style is new to you too..
ReplyDeleteYeah i know!! thats why i was two ways about posting this..cause this is a lil above experimental for my poetry..but it was just...something that didnt flow out very well and it puzzled me..so i wanted to get feedback. And dont worry its just a one time thing :P
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ReplyDeleteam not worried cause i am sure you will get better at it if you dont let it become a one time thing and keep trying it..
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ReplyDeleteHaha.
I dont enjoy this kind of poetry too much.
I dont like pushing it out. This kind it doesnt flow well in me.
Hence i thought of abandoning it.
what post did you remove?
Eh, so what's the mood?
ReplyDeleteHaha
ReplyDelete:)
Pretty mixed.
I'm either madly madly hyper and jumpy and excited
or asleep.
:P
Howsoever, lets not differentiate :)
ReplyDeleteThis. Captured me like once your picture did that prompted that one writing of you which you probably don't remember but I do. And will.
ReplyDeleteThis captured me. So there is no more to say Lovely Shraddha
I do remember Rachel. Twas my favourite poem of yours :P :D
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you. It means a lot that you liked it.
And i should love to capture you like this everyday every minute..i just wish i could.
~ Love goes boom..after a helluva long time :P