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A search for happiness is nothing but finding a home in a hearts of few so safe..that you cant help but keep trying to stay in. Hope yall still want in.
~Shraddha
A search for happiness is nothing but finding a home in a hearts of few so safe..that you cant help but keep trying to stay in. Hope yall still want in.
~Shraddha
In a while,looking at a few old words you wrote once,
some being those, which makes you wonder how you wrote it,
unless you got that ardour , that small drug you were addicted with,that small shelter, that old family. Makes you silent.
In a while, now writing a few words. And that exhilation to share it,ain't the same. And you think about the old time.
Makes you silent again.
~ Manisha.
One day when I get superpowers (ahem), I'd ask you to hold my hands and I would make you see what I see. Feel, How I feel. I would want to have you look at the world, the stars, the moon, the ocean, the way I see them. And in that maelstrom of visions I would get to see the world in your image. Experience this sanctum through your eyes. And then when I write, that would be my greatest work ever. Because It would have been written by all of us and none of us. But I don't have superpowers, so lets make this place, the sanctum in my dream.
~Sharad
One day when I get superpowers (ahem), I'd ask you to hold my hands and I would make you see what I see. Feel, How I feel. I would want to have you look at the world, the stars, the moon, the ocean, the way I see them. And in that maelstrom of visions I would get to see the world in your image. Experience this sanctum through your eyes. And then when I write, that would be my greatest work ever. Because It would have been written by all of us and none of us. But I don't have superpowers, so lets make this place, the sanctum in my dream.
~Sharad
Wednesday, May 12, 2010
Tone
*A note, a comment, a little hint. Do not read this plainly, monotone, or like a mime. Read with the hint of rhyme - although there is none. Read with sarcasm, frivolity, and mourning...Read with emotion that had been locked into a television screen. If that makes sense to you.
Without further ado:
If there was ever a picturesque "blackened woods"- it was these.
Painted over by an oil so thick that it not only chocked the trees, but air itself. Screams were swallowed whole by these woods. Although you are lost, however no more or less than anyone else, you dare not take off the blindfold.
Being lost, at first, was not so bad. The darkness was not lonely, and it hardly appeared dark. The shallow breathing that was forced out of your deflating lungs was symphonic, and almost companion worthy.
It began with the itch on your nose.
You itched it. Just barely brushed the blindfold. Just barely.
In fact, so barely that it was softer than the air around it, and even the occasional breeze. However, it was so alien that you became aware of everything for a moment.
The oil layers on your skin and the numbing cold as it stiffened on you - but that was gone soon enough.
But something wasn't. You felt the edge of your blindfold on your face so acutely that every thread hummed with a strange life.
You dared not touch it.
But it rubbed on you, slipped and slid across your eyes, and you itched and rubbed your body in hope to distract yourself. But it was powerful. Even in sex you felt the threads over your eyes. Mocking you in their strange life.
Sitting at the roots of this blackened tree in these blackened woods...You've been bleeding out slowly...You cut your tongue out...Ripped your nails out...Still the blindfold lay against your eyes like the marriage band. Stuck. Suffocating.
The shallow breathing had slowed and you heard your heartbeat. A thump, a thump, quicker thump ... then a thump, a thump.
Touching your face, the blood smeared. Your fingers skirted away from that filth. Skirted until you began touching the electrifying edges of that blindfold. You place your hands over your eyes as if to smother it in. Grimacing.
You become the scream swallowed whole.
**
I've got no explanation for this.
All of you! Come out of hiding immediately.
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Wow. it was odd. It started out smooth but segued into this maelstrom of activity. It was good. But im gonna give this another read and comment more.
ReplyDeleteWell it was the perfect attempt to get us out of waiting. For sure :)
ReplyDeleteI didnt exactly get the point. Maybe it needs a second read. Maybe to me there is none. But nonetheless..il go with Sharad.
It seemed a lot like an attempted horror story. :P
pft. had no reason nor anything
ReplyDeleteWhen does what I write have a reason?
Actually there is one sorta. But you know. Only I would understand lol.
I was bored. It came out. I like to read it a cheerful cynical way. Makes me happy. Lol.
I'm demented?
I don't do horror.
Haha. Thank god you dont do horror..cause you are much too ermm pretty pretty for that. And in a cynical way does make it enjoyable. You should have put THAT in the beginning.
ReplyDeleteA lil demented maybe. But...arent we all?
ReplyDeletePretty pretty?! Rawr Shraddha Rawr!!
ReplyDeleteLol.
Eh, I'm far too lazy to edit and I doubt anyone else will read it so I'll keep it in mind for future notice.
Yeah, here. I mean. We got a guy making out with a skull.
I am rather chirpy today, ignore me.
Ignoring you...? Is that possible?
ReplyDeleteOh and that looks like more than making out. :/ Sometimes like a one sided horrid french kiss though agreed. IcK fareed can be weird at times :] Not that im complaining.
ReplyDeleteAny implication behind the tedium spurring from this prose escapes me totally. Whats the meaning of meaningless here?
ReplyDeleteFind meaning, I'm not a thread to give tangent.
ReplyDeleteHe can be. But he's hot so we forgive him Shraddha, muhahaha.
I know I'm loud. No ignoring muah.
. very graphic ... and almost violently so ... it seems like something is amiss ... like when one is feeling intensely watched ... just my thoughts ... a very fascinating read ...
ReplyDelete- serah
Everyone is watched by society, and judged.
ReplyDeleteThank you